Well done. A very powerful 42.
"We fall together" and "Earth covers us" - two three word sequences that pack so much impact.
Wow. I'm amazed at the amount of emotion you portrayed in only 42 words. Well done.
Oh - when taken together with the title, it's even better. Fabulous. Thanks for linking this up!
Thank you. Truthfully, the title was a bit of an afterthought. I'm glad you liked it.
So very, very powerful.. packed a punch in 42 words, you did...
quick foreshadow of events, good write.
Wow. That title. Yikes.
You kicked me in the gut with this one...Great write!
So, so powerful and that last line is just beautiful. Great take.
Absolutely horrifying. And I read that your title was last minute, but it was a game changer. Mighty fine! (innatejames.wordpress.com)
Thank you very much for your comment.