She moaned a little different; her hips softly gyrated with the sting. I surveyed my work, the lovely shades of red that would soon give way to purples and yellows. I traded the koa paddle for the single-tail. Time to get serious.
Great voice - like an artist admiring his/her work, choosing just the right tool for the desired effect. And a rather daring take on the prompt. ;) Great job! Thanks for linking it up.
Just looking around at the early entries. Oh my - very well done, very well. Two lashes for you :D
ReplyDeleteThank you. I'm glad you liked it.
DeleteNaughty, aren't you? ;) Really different take on the prompt :)
ReplyDeleteOuch...that is painful! Masochism...or is that sadism? :D
ReplyDeleteSadism for the top. Masochism for the bottom. Fun for everyone.
DeleteMan on woman or woman on woman. Nice to leave us guessing :-)
ReplyDeleteReminds me of 50 Shades of Grey and Slave Factory.
ReplyDeleteNever read either. I hear they are rather tame though. ;)
DeleteGoodness! What a creative take on the prompt. Love the line about the changing colours, which is my favourite thing to watch with bruises. :)
ReplyDeleteWowwie! Very nicely done. Such vivid imagery...
ReplyDeleteVery unique take!
ReplyDeleteOH, my! I hope you don't get too serious, lol.
ReplyDeleteIt's all relative, isn't it.
DeleteNice take on the prompt - very provocative.
ReplyDeleteNicely written, & different.
ReplyDeleteOooooohhhhhhhhhh. *shivers*
ReplyDeletemeeow!! lol Nice!
ReplyDeleteGreat voice - like an artist admiring his/her work, choosing just the right tool for the desired effect. And a rather daring take on the prompt. ;) Great job! Thanks for linking it up.
ReplyDeleteOuch, I mean a great big OUCH.
ReplyDeleteClearly, the narrator is a connoisseur. You communicated this so well without telling. Well done!
ReplyDeleteTime to get serious, indeed. You've been holding back...
ReplyDeleteSorry to disappoint, but it's all fiction. Now maple paddle and elk hide flogger... that I've done. ;)
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