Monday, May 19, 2014

Difficult Decisions


It’s hard to believe a year has passed.
My heart still lays on the asphalt where it happened.
Time heals all wounds.
Bullshit! Nothing can heal this.
Living without them isn’t really living.
Halcion or the 9mm?
Not much of a choice.

19 comments:

  1. this caught my attention - didn't see it coming

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  2. Do I smell a revenge attack?

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    1. I was leaning more towards an end to misery, but I guess it can be open to interpretation.

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  3. oooh man. oh MAN!! this is heavy heavy stuff. i'm so sorry.

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  4. omg! How awful! Not your post because it was put together wonderfully. But the situation. :(

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  5. This is so good!

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  6. Not much of a choice, no. Packs a punch.

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  7. Kicked in the gut, again. Nice job!

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  8. Very nicely written--not a word wasted!

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  9. Oh,heart rending!Excellent writing :-) Btw,could you please remove the captcha?Thanks

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    1. So, I had to google captcha. I am new to all this blogging stuff and have no idea what I'm doing. I though typed something wrong. I hate those things, I think it's gone now. I'm glad you liked the writing.

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  10. Wow, that is intense. Thank you for clarifying that it was fiction. It really felt, well, real. Great job. Thanks for posting it to the gargleblaster.

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    1. Thank you. For some reason I go all "dark" when I write. I'm not sure why. I'm a pretty happy guy. I'm glad you liked it.

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  11. Wow, that really was intense and as Christine said...it seemed real! Amazing gargleblaster! ♥

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  12. I had to google Halcion. Reading the description made me gasp. So much intensity here. Excellent choices, IR!

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