The time got my attention, too! Great use of these short lines and matter-of-fact tone.
also, "elusive" = brilliant
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Very good indeed!
Cool! He got what he wanted!
As a former swimmer -- I relate completely!
Do you relate to the mermaid or the goddess? ;-)
The time at the top made it even better. Hero-worship and teenage love, nothing better for a summer swim.
This is fun. I like the choice of a competition for this prompt.
This was awesome! Young love. ♥
As a former swimmer, I love this!
Looks like you've got a few of us former swimmers splashing around in a pool of nostalgia. Thanks :-)
Love it :-) (not a former swimmer, a struggling current one)
SPLASH!!! Of course the butterfly. lol
The confidence people have when they're doing what they're good at is a mighty mighty aphrodisiac. You captured that feeling so well here!
The time got my attention, too! Great use of these short lines and matter-of-fact tone.
ReplyDeletealso, "elusive" = brilliant
DeleteThank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
DeleteVery good indeed!
ReplyDeleteCool! He got what he wanted!
ReplyDeleteAs a former swimmer -- I relate completely!
ReplyDeleteDo you relate to the mermaid or the goddess? ;-)
DeleteThe time at the top made it even better.
ReplyDeleteHero-worship and teenage love, nothing better for a summer swim.
This is fun. I like the choice of a competition for this prompt.
ReplyDeleteThis was awesome! Young love. ♥
ReplyDeleteAs a former swimmer, I love this!
ReplyDeleteLooks like you've got a few of us former swimmers splashing around in a pool of nostalgia. Thanks :-)
ReplyDeleteLove it :-) (not a former swimmer, a struggling current one)
ReplyDeleteSPLASH!!! Of course the butterfly. lol
ReplyDeleteThe confidence people have when they're doing what they're good at is a mighty mighty aphrodisiac. You captured that feeling so well here!
ReplyDelete