Monday, June 16, 2014

Trust


 
 
She was blindfolded, bound. There was complete trust, but fear always crept into her mind. That’s what made the game worth playing. I pushed the button on the stiletto, an unfamiliar sound. She drew a sharp breath and withdrew… then she smiled.

 

15 comments:

  1. Very interesting. Trust is a hard thing to come by.

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  2. Saucy ;) fun direction for the prompt

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  3. Wow. That's some hot writing. Good one!

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  4. oh wow. WOW.
    more please.

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    1. That's what she said!
      (Sorry, couldn't help it.)

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    2. Lol TnT. I'm always up for a good "That's what she said!" comment.

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  5. I like how you use those two sharp sounds in the midst of the otherwise silent scene.

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  6. I like how you gave her the pause near the end. Nice one.

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  7. Sound becomes all important when you're blindfolded. Great take on this prompt!

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    1. There's experience in that comment. I'm glad you liked it.

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    1. Thanks. I can assure you that the description is but a small part of the fun. ;-)

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  9. When like meets like, it's all good... Love that I could hear the stiletto, too.

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  10. I love "the button on the stiletto" bit. Such a visual and engaging piece.

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