Monday, June 9, 2014

My Brat

                           

I don't like yelling and fighting, and I can't quarrel.

Bullshit! You love messing with me.

Shut up, I hate you.

I love it when you get feisty. You are a brat, aren't you.

Sorry, Sir. I am a brat. Your brat.

 


17 comments:

  1. I like that last line and how you included the Grace Kelly epilogue. well done

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    1. Thanks Lance. I like the last line too. Truth be told, that is only other words that aren't mine. They were, however, the inspiration.

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  2. Ah, *that* Grace! Super.

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    1. Not sure why, but my head immediately went to Grace Kelly when I read the prompt.

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  3. Love the Grace Kelly quote!

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  4. Nicely done. I like it!

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  5. Nice touch with Grace Kelly quote!! ♥

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  6. I like how you worked that in there. The dialog was very well done.

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  7. Ooo, sassy. ;) Love the way you used a quote from the classiest of ladies in such a provocative way. Nicely done! Thanks for linking it up.

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  8. nice sneaky twists, there.

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  9. Hmm, you think Grace Kelly was a brat behind closed doors? We all have our secrets!

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    1. I kind of think all women have some brat in them. Only a few embrace it.

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  10. Very creative. I like how it ended with a vow of loyalty.

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